My Top 5 Favorite Picture Books on Giving and Gratitude

November 20, 2018December 04, 2018 Books, Creative Writing, Editing & Beyond, Uncategorized

Every year, when the holidays roll around, I have people asking me for holiday themed children’s books to share with their kids or classrooms. This year, I’ve decided to make it easy by compiling my Top 5 Favorite Picture Books on Giving and Gratitude just in time for Thanksgiving.

Understanding gratitude, and practicing it regularly, is something I try to be mindful of each day…and I certainly don’t always succeed. Gratitude has to be taught and practiced consistently before it can be an integral part of our daily lives. I also try to instill this idea in my own children, through practice, example, and of course and always, through stories.

“Piglet noticed that even though he had a Very Small Heart, it could hold a rather large amount of Gratitude.” A.A. Milne

#1 The Invisible Boy

A simple act of kindness can transform an invisible boy into a friend… No one ever seems to notice Brian, that is until Justin, the new kid in class, decides to include Brian in his project. Through this unlikely friendship, the once invisible Brian finds a way to shine. The Invisible Boy by Trudy Ludwig teaches readers that sometimes the most generous gift we can share, is one of attention and love.

#2 All the World

All the World by Liz Garton Scanlon is one of my favorite books––one that I gift to others time and time again. The sweeping illustrations by Marla Frazee follow a family as they spend a day in town amongst their neighbors while the story reminds us there are a million and one ways to give every ordinary day that we live: The tiniest shell on the beach, the warmth of a meal with others, the beauty found in human connections are all things to give and be grateful for.

#3 Splat Says Thank You!

Who doesn’t love a good Splat the Cat book? If you’re a fan of this wacky cat and his mouse friend Seymour, or looking for a light laughable read about giving and gratitude, then grab a copy of Splat Says Thank You! by Rob Scotton. Seymour needs cheering up and Splat has an idea: Splat has been working hard on a very special thank-you book that shows all the warmhearted and hilarious reasons Splat is thankful for Seymour and their friendship.

#4 Thanks a Million

If you are a poetry lover, then Thanks a Million by Nikki Grimes is the book on gratitude for you. Featuring a sixteen poems in varying formats from a haiku to a rebus riddle, Thanks a Million reminds readers how far a simple thank-you can go. Illustrations by Cozbi A. Cabrera compliment each poem in a seamless artful expression of giving and gratitude.

#5 The Giving Tree

And of course, a blog post on picture books about giving would be incomplete without mention of the Shel Silverstein’s, The Giving Tree. Published in 1964, this children’s classic explores the idea of selfless love, as shared between a boy and his tree. However, perhaps one of the most divisive books in children’s literature, I would be remiss not to mention the dual-nature of the tale, which also poses the question: Can selfless love be exploited? What do you think?

One Most Anticipated Picture Book of 2019 on Giving and Gratitude

What Is Given from the Heart by the late Patricia c. McKissack tells the story of James Otis and his Mama as they find ways to give despite what little they have themselves. When the Temples, neighbors and friends, lose everything in a fire, James’ church collects items the family may need. It takes James some time to figure out how he can contribute to the Temple’s “love box” when he has so little himself. The powerful tale of compassion reminds us that giving from the heart, touches the heart as well. Patricia C. McKissack is a three-time Coretta Scott King Award winner and Newbery Honor author. Some of her other notable picture books include: The Honest-to-Goodness Truth, Let’s Clap, Jump, Sing & Shout; Dance, Spin & Turn It Out!, Loved Best (Ready-For-Chapters) and Goin’ Someplace Special.

Do you have your own story to share? If you are ready to write a children’s book, or have a manuscript you would like me to edit, contact me below. I look forward to reading your story!

What Genre is my Children’s Book?

March 01, 2018December 04, 2018 Book Editors, Books, Creative Writing, Editing & Beyond, Uncategorized

Have you ever asked the question: What genre is my children’s book?

More than once I have had a client send me a fantastic story tucked into the wrong format…and when I ask them about it, inevitably they ask me, “So, what genre is my children’s book exactly?” It’s easy to see how this happens when we are talking about children’s books. Surprisingly they are one of the more complicated formats––with so many sub-categories and target age groups and guidelines––even seasoned writers get a little confused as to which category their story fits. Even I get confused at times with all the (ever-fluctuating) industry standards. Although the formats can feel confusing, they are manageable, and in this article we are going to look at all of the main children’s book categories in order to grasp some standards and write our own children’s books in the most effective ways possible

Additionally it’s easy to confuse the formats with genre so let’s settle that first since many times people use the words interchangeably when talking about children’s books. If you are asking about the genre of your children’s book then you are wondering if your book is fiction, non-fiction, fantasy, etc. However, when I get the question: What genre is my children’s book? more often than not people are asking in which category does their book belong––which age group will be reading it––and that is what we are going to look at here.

This is a great resource for anyone new to writing children’s books, for authors who plan to self-publish, and for educators. It’s important to remember that these are guidelines, and sometimes it’s okay to break the rules. However…

The Golden Rule

There is one kids book golden rule that is rarely broken, and it goes a little something like this:

Children want to read stories about other children who are a little bit older than themselves.

This means if your protagonist is ten-years-old your readership is likely seven- to nine-year-olds.

One of the best examples I can recall that breaks this rule and does it spectacularly is found in Philip Pullman’s His Dark Materials trilogy where the protagonist, Lyra, is eleven-years-old. The fantasy trilogy, however, was marketed as a young adult book series. (But fantasy is good at breaking the rules, right?)

So, keeping the golden rule in mind, let’s look at the individual formats.

Children’s Book Categories

Board Books

Target Ages: 0–5 years

Target Word Count: less than 300

Board books are those tough little things you give to the smallest of readers. Often ten or less pages, they are made from thick cardstock or cardboard, and target children 0–4 years old. These books are heavy duty, light on text and have a lot of illustration. In fact, many times a board book will contain no more than 10–20 words total. Board books are meant to be read to children who are early emerging readers, meaning they are listening to the story, but board books are also meant to be chewed on, slept with, and treated as a toy.

Board books will often cover early learning concepts such as opposites, counting, letters, feelings, or simple family dynamics. They may or may not span time, and if they do, it will be no longer than a short period, definitely less than a day. Sometimes board books will not tell a story, but rather follow a theme. For example, the pages may simply list a color and have an accompanying illustration.

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Picture Books

Target Ages: 2–7

Target Word Count: 400–900

Most often when people think of children’s books, they are referring to picture books. At standard, picture books are 32 pages long, including the cover pages, introductions, back flaps, and copyright information. Though the standard is 32 pages, they can technically come in page lengths that are any multiples of 8: 16, 24, 32, 40 or 48 pages. They are reliant on both text and illustration and text length can range from 100–1000 words, sometimes more. However, the best picture books are short on text and rely equally or heavily on illustration. Sometimes picture books can cross over into board books and be published in both formats. Picture books are for children aged 2–10 years (at the high end), with an average target age of 2–7 years old.

Picture books talk about universal themes and offer intriguing or kid-relatable situations while challenging the reader’s or listener’s imagination. Themes are approachable and there is usually one main character, one plot, and one story line. Picture books use rhythm and cadence to engage the young listener and they employ repetition. In the book Writing Picture Books, Anne Winford Paul explains that picture books should offer a simple question and answer. This idea holds true for most picture books out there and it’s a great rule of thumb to follow. One theme, one throughline, one main character or idea, with an answer at the end.

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Early Readers

Target Ages: 5–8 years

Target Word Count: 1000–2500

Early readers are books with slightly more text than found in your average picture book. They have 32 to 64 pages, with simple, repetitive text. Usually every page or every other page has an illustration. These books are targeted towards new and emerging readers and often repeat a particular sight word or phrase for these early readers to memorize. They have a simple sentence structure, can be read aloud or silently, and often come in series form.

Topics and themes are lighthearted and books usually explore one idea, subject or theme. Many times books are character based, as seen in the examples below. The word count doesn’t rise above 3500 words on the high end. Sometimes easy readers will have a couple of chapters or sections making it easy for a child to set the book aside for a break if they need to take one. You can find a wide variety of well done non-fiction books in this category as well, such as the National Geographic Little Kids First Big Books series.

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Chapter Books

Target Ages: 7–10 years

Target Word Count: 4000–12000

Some of my favorite children’s books are found in the chapter book format. I like this category because for the first time we start to see subplots and more complex story lines. Before middle grade came along as a category, chapter books were the only bridge to close the gap between picture books and young adult. Many of our classic favorites as adults today are found in this format: Charlotte’s Web, The Best Christmas Pageant Ever, and basically anything by Roald Dahl. This format is also home to some of those timeless classic series like the Magic Tree House books.

Chapter books will have few to no illustrations and are typically not much longer than 100 pages. They are for young advancing readers, typically for elementary school aged children. These books can range in difficulty with some offering simple language as one might find in Catwings or Flat Stanley, to more complex sentence structures and plot lines as found in the examples below. Many chapter books are single character or subject based and they may contain a simple subplot or two.

Chapter books span a wide audience and reading levels vary. For this reason, there really is no average word count within the range. Following the simple idea that should your book be for a younger reader, you will have fewer words, is a good loose guideline to follow. For this category definitely take time to read some comp books before writing your manuscript so you get a feel for the language and length.

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Middle Grade

Target Ages: 8–12 years

Target Word Count: 30,000–50,000

Middle Grade novels can be divided into two subcategories: books for middle grade school children and books for upper elementary school children. They contain longer chapters than found in chapter books, often no illustrations, and can have over 100 pages. Sometimes they can mingle with either chapter books or young adult, but they absolutely deserve a format of their own. The readership is voracious at this age, so series are popular.

It’s hard to say exactly when middle grade novels became ‘a thing’ but it is worth noting it was about the same time as the Harry Potter series emerged; with Harry Potter, for the first time ever, we saw readers growing up with their main character. I’m not attributing the emergence of the middle grade category to the publication of the Harry Potter books, but I do think at that time publishers realized there was a need for a whole new set of books that would reach this since underdeveloped and under-explored market.

Let’s look at the two subcategories in more detail.

Lower Middle Grade

Target Ages: 7–10 years

Target Word Count: 20,000–35,000

Lower Middle Grade is a really fun format to read and explore. The themes will be complex but approachable: no kissing, no gory violence, subtle politics, if any. The stories will have a subplot or two. Oftentimes lower middle grade employees elements like humor or explores factual, science-based ideas or historical events. They are also great candidates for fantasy or magic realism since the readership is in that magical place between childhood and ability to “believe” before teetering into the pre-teen years.

The lower middle grade format is typically under 35,000 words with more like 25,000 as an average.

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Upper Middle Grade, or Tween

Target Ages: 10–13 years

Target Word Count: 45,000–55,000

Upper Middle Grade might be my favorite children’s book format of all. I love that the readership is able to follow complex plots and storylines plus explore more mature themes without getting into quite as much teen angst as we find in young adult. Relationships may hint at romance, but it is still innocent…probably still no kissing. Violence may be present but it does not dominate the story.

The books are a bit longer, up to about 70,000 words max with an average around 50,000. Sometimes this sub-catgory is referred to as ‘tween’ especially when the themes of the book explicitly explore pre-teen related issues.

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Young Adult

Target Ages: 13–adult

Target Word Count: 40,000–70,000

Young Adult books are read by teens ages 13 to as many years as 25 and adults. In fact, the books can cross over into adult literature, especially if they are fantasy or sci-fi based. They have complex stories, plots, and characters and read like an adult novel, but explore issues and topics that teens can relate to. Themes can employee really complex or even difficult subjects such as sex, violence, drugs, abuse, suicide…the list goes on. Not all young adult books will focus on these ideas, but often at least one of them is present since these are real-world issues that teens come face-to-face with on a daily basis.

Word count can go as high as 90,000 but keeping it around 70,000 is a safe bet. Some coming of age classics emerge from this category as well as really fantastic examples of fantasy series.

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Still confused?

It’s important to remember that these are just guidelines. If you plan to stray, have good reason. If you’re still asking the question, what genre is my children’s book? and want a little more guidance, contact me below. I’m happy to help! Sometimes authors have a great idea, a great start…heck, they might even be great writers already, but they just can’t seem to make it work. That’s what an editor is for; let’s talk.

Understanding Editorial Services

August 19, 2017December 04, 2018 Book Editors, Creative Writing, Editing & Beyond, Uncategorized

So you’ve written your first book. You know you want to publish it. You are dreaming of big success! But you also know your manuscript needs a little work. Understanding editorial services and what is available to you is your first step in knowing who to hire before getting your book published. Obviously, you want to hire an editor who has worked on books in your genre before. The services you need will depend on where you are in your manuscript and how much editing has already been done, and you will need different types of editing at different points in the process. Let’s start with the basics of book editing and break it down from there.

What is editing?

Definition: Book editing the process of preparing written material for publication or presentation by
correcting, revising or adapting text.

Navigating the many book editing services available can be difficult, especially if you are new to the writing industry, on a budget, self-publishing or requiring a variety of services. In addition, a wealth of misconceptions accompany the seemingly complicated industry of editing, proofreading and publishing. In order to find the right kind of editor it’s imperative that you know what type of services you’re after.

What do Editors do?

Editors complete a variety of tasks for authors, but as a general rule, they help you to polish and clean up your manuscript in order to submit it for publication and sometimes to self publish. Understanding editorial services can feel complicated. But here is a breakdown of all the different kinds of editing services you can use that will clarify some of your concerns and help you to find the right children’s book editor for your book.

The Breakdown — Understanding Editorial Services

Developmental Editing (or Content Editing)

Definition: Developmental Editing (Content Editing) involves a significant structuring or restructuring of a manuscript’s discourse.

Developmental Editors and Content Editors are one and the same and they are your go-to people during the early drafts of your manuscript. You’re a writer, so you likely question your own work: write – rewrite – go back – write again. And still you wonder if what you’re on target with your manuscript.

Developmental editors will evaluate your manuscript as a whole and will quickly become your best buddy, offering great advice, constructive criticism and if they’re good, words of encouragement. Don’t skimp here! This person is trained to ensure your plot is fluid, your characters are popping from the page, and your story flows. Plus, your developmental editor will enhance your narrative voice and tone while keeping true to the delivery of your syntax.

Look for someone who is willing to offer a fluid working relationship and who will communicate openly on major changes. Interview this person ahead of time. Get a feel for who they are and what they do to ensure they are the right fit. Out of all the editors you may hire – you will spend the most time working with your developmental editor. Although these editors by nature do check for grammar and spelling mistakes, remember, that’s not why you hired them!

Here is a breakdown of the types of things your Developmental Editor will evaluate:

The core intentions and goals of your book
The underlying premise and the story
Your character development
The use of dialogue and sensory language and descriptions
Your narrative voice
The overall pacing, style and language

Your developmental editor will likely be able to give you some advice on industry and genre standards, can help with writing if needed, and provide you with creative insight and clear solutions for problems or holes in your manuscript.

Copy Editing

Definition: Copy Editing involves the improvement of the formatting, style and accuracy of a text, including grammar and punctuation.

Often confused with proofreading, Copy Editing is rather a revision process like developmental editing, and not a correction process like proofreading. Copy Editing is an important step to bridge the work of your developmental editor and prepare you for hiring your proofreader.

A Copy Editor will check your manuscript making sure the syntax is smooth and the writing adheres to the conventions of grammar. They’ll also make sure that your wording is proper and precise and punctuation is appropriate and correctly placed. The copy editor is important for evaluating industry and genre standards as well and will make sure that your intentions for your book are being conveyed correctly. These are the people to hire before you submit your manuscript to a publisher or agent. They will bring your rough manuscript to a professional level.

Here is a breakdown of the services your Copy Editor will offer:

Correct syntax and overall readability of your manuscript
Ensure grammatical conventions are used correctly
Fix punctuation
Look for consistency in content layout and delivery
Make sure chapters or sections are consistent

In addition your Copy Editor will globally check your headings and chapter sections making sure the wording is correct and the formatting is fluid throughout, and they will just check overall to make sure that your content as a whole is consistent.

Proofreading

Definition: Proofreading is a galley proof or electronic copy of a manuscript in order to detect and correct production errors of the text. This is the last step before publication.

A proofreader is the nit-picky, detail oriented, ‘fan of the red-pen’ person whose job it is to make sure your manuscript is error free. Often proofreading is too much for not only you as the author to undertake, but also too much for your developmental and/or copy editor. You can have the same person do your copy and developmental editing – but hire a new proofreader. Both you and your editor will know your manuscript inside and out. This means errors such as simple grammar, formatting and spelling mistakes can easily be overlooked! Proofreading is particularly important for authors wishing to self publish.

That’s why hiring a separate proofreader to sweep your manuscript immediately before you self publish, is key. Don’t hire your proofreader until you are completely satisfied with your content. You don’t want to make any major changes once your proofreader gets your manuscript – their proofreading services will take your manuscript to completion. In addition, for this reason, authors who self publish often have more than one separate proofreader review their manuscript.

Here is a breakdown of what your Proofreader will do for you:

Correct all grammar mistakes
Find and correct all typos
Correct all punctuation mistakes
Ensure formatting is in place and you are ready for print (in some cases you may need a Layout Designer to do this)

Your proofreader will likely offer you very straightforward services. Often proofreaders can help with formatting for publication as well. But if you are self publishing, consider hiring a Layout Designer to get your book into print. Expect to have a thorough job and completed manuscript, one that is ready for print, when your proofreader is finished.

Hiring the Right Editor

The type of editor you need depends on where you are in your project. Don’t skimp; rather pay for the right services. Remember, you are working on ‘your baby’, something near and dear to your heart. Hire someone who will treat your book with care and respect. When you are interviewing for the right kind of book editing services, don’t be afraid to ask for proof of experience, a Skype or phone call, or an interview as part of the process.

In addition, many editors have no problem looking your first few pages to ensure they are the right fit. This goes both ways! Editors want a good read and writers want a good editor. If they are willing to take the time, you should be too. Editors can also offer a wealth of other services such as book coaching, advice for formatting or publishing options, query and synopsis development, and even ghostwriting services. Make sure you talk to your potential editors about all your needs and learn about all they can offer.

Wise Words: Self Publishing and Editing

But remember, with an influx of self publishing today many authors are looking for an ‘all-in-one’ editing
package. Be wary of editors who claim they can do it all! You absolutely do not want the same person who helped you with your developmental editing to do your proofreading. Editors should be specialized. With a rising need to find editing services on the cheap, people who self publish are finding they put out shoddy work only to have to republish their books after receiving bad reviews on Amazon or B&N. If you are self-publishing you won’t have a publishing house to back you up or pay for your mistakes. You’ll have to put in the time and money up front to have a solid (and sellable) book at the end of the day.

Just a tidbit of cool information: When you sign with a publishing house you and your book will go through, at minimum, 20 sets of revisions and rounds of edits before a final proof. So, as you are getting ready to hire your editor(s), keep this in mind.

It pays to pay for quality work. Give your book the time it deserves.

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How to Find a Children’s Book Editor

September 12, 2016 Book Editors, Editing & Beyond, Uncategorized

Understanding how to find a children’s book editor is a key step when producing a strong piece of children’s literature in the hopes of publishing your book. There are tons upon tons of children’s book editors available and the range of editorial services is wide and deep. Because there are so many editors to choose from, knowing what editorial services you need is the first place to start.

If you have written a children’s book, there is no reason to choose an editor who is not a seasoned children’s literature specialist. You want someone who understands the complex genre systems within the umbrella genre of children’s books.

Are you writing a picture book? A chapter book or easy reader? Is your book for middle grade readers or young adults? Or do you even know for sure! What age groups will be reading your book? How many words should your book have to be age appropriate? What themes or topics are typically relevant? These are some of the more generalized questions your editor can answer for you.

Where to Start

Start with a google search and see what comes up. Don’t feel like you have to choose from the children’s book editors that appear on the first page of your search. Dig a little deeper by going to pages two or three and beyond and see if you can find an editor who is specialized or who has edited books similar to your own. An easy way to do this is to open just a few of your favorites in tabs and check out each editors’ website and about me section. Take a look at their portfolio if they have one too.

Another great resource is Reedsy; a platform for finding freelance editors, writers, and all things book related. You can also use the Editorial Freelancers Association to help narrow your search. These websites are fantastic because they vet their members, meaning you will only be viewing the best of the best when it comes to editing.

Once you have narrowed your options down to a few editors, five or less, lets say, set up some initial contact with each of the children’s book editors you’ve found. Start by contacting them and see if they can answer your core questions via email. Find out if they are willing to chat with you by phone or skype about your project when you are ready to make a decision. Ask for them to specifically identify what children’s book editorial services they will be able to provide.

What Editorial Services You Need

Your editor should be able to provide you with all or a combination of some of the following services:

Developmental Editing
Copy Editing
Proofreading
Editorial Assessment
Query Review

These services should be clearly defined and will include line items such as:

Proofreading for grammar, punctuation and syntax.
Line editing for dialogue and sensory descriptions, narrative voice, pacing and line by line flow
Global editing for through-line, age and/or genre appropriateness, character and/or subject development

Your editor should also be able to globally address the overall craft and literary art of your manuscript and provide advice on the format in which your manuscript should be published.

Many editors can offer ghostwriting services as well.

What to Look For in Your Children’s Book Editor

There are some red flags to look for when choosing a your children’s book editor. Even if the person seems right, you’ll want to pass if your potential editor does any of the following:

Asks for a fee to review your manuscript before hire.
Is unwilling to chat with you about your project before hire.
Has never edited a children’s book before.
Does not have a clear grasp of the genre.
Is unable to offer the specific editorial services you are looking for.
Does not ask you to sign a contract.
Guarantees that your book will ‘get published’. This may sound ideal, but it is an empty promise. Good editors are specialized and no one–I repeat no one–can guarantee your book will be published besides the publisher herself.

Here are some tips on what you should look for in your children’s book editor:

Takes time to talk with you about your project before hire.
Clearly explains to you how the editing process works.
Has edited children’s books before; preferably has edited a children’s book in your genre before.
Provides the specific editorial services you need.
See if they can offer you advice in other areas such as seeking out an agent or self-publishing your book.

After you have narrowed your search down, set up a time to chat over the phone with your last couple contenders. This will give you a feel for their personality, writing style, and just allow you to get a better idea of who you will be working with. Go with your gut here. Since you have already learned how to find a children’s book editor and narrowed down your choices based on experience, at this point you are choosing who seems to have the best grasp of your (and your book’s) personal needs. At this point, feel confident in making your decision, choosing your editor, and moving onto the next step of realizing your dreams of finishing your children’s book.

If you are interested in chatting with me about your project, please feel free to contact me below. And Happy Writing to You!